Yuuchou Kouki

The Arrancar walked around Hueco Mundo, bored. "I need something to do... after that Hollow bait was sent I can't see a thing here." Said Yuuchou walking with his hands in his pockets and his eyes looking at every little thing. Yuuchou shrugged. "Garganta." He put his hands out and ripped a hole to the human world. His eyes shut as he looked up at the sun and smiled. "This is a little better." He said, covering his eye so no one would see his mask shard. "With all those Hollows here I should be safe and sound. But just in case." He took out a piece of Hollow bait and broke it. "Wait was that a piece of strong bait, I didn't know." He said sarcastically and broke out laughing. He drew his eyes to the streets filled with Hollows, Menos' and a couple soul reapers. "Can't let them ruin my fun." Said Yuuchou running away into the distance.

I give this a B. If you want to be an Arrancar, you need to get an A. Although you have correct grammer and spelling this still isn't really that long.....you can try again, or PM Ryo and ask him if he can make a special exepction (he might; I mean its not like we have that many people to bitch about it), to be an Adjuchas level Arrancar. But in order to do that we have to say that you were arracarized like 500 yrs ago during the canon story, and that you were just a weak hollow and only now, 500yrs later are you showing any skill.....if we do that you could be like the head espada or something.....So in short just PM Ryo and ask him.

I am going to make this exception the way that Mange said.

He said - " to be an Adjuchas level Arrancar. But in order to do that we have to say that you were arracarized like 500 yrs ago during the canon story, and that you were just a weak hollow and only now, 500yrs later are you showing any skill.....if we do that you could be like the head espada or something"

I agree with that so you can either do another test or you can make your character like that.

How would Adjuchas level work as an Arrancar, Adjuchas are cannibal Hollow's how would it work as an Arrancar?

an Adjuchas level Arrancar is an Arrancar that was Adjuchas level before becoming an Arrancar. Most Arrancar are like this. There are a few Vasto Lorode Level but there has only ever been one Gilian level to become Arrancar.

Ok