I dont quite understand the first attack, and on the second attack....Quincy arrows vary in strength just like human wepons, so fix that and the second will be approved, and the third attack.....um add like a ranking system to the affectivness on characters (Like S isnt affected by it B and A get blinded and C and D get burned (with vary degrees of intensity depending on the rank; C gets less burned than D) Or something along those lines)
You still have to train to learn them (So come up with ranks for them,even if only you can use them) And training to learn a zanpaktous name is 5 paragraphs (remember i said you had to do the max amount of paragraphs because you're a hollow)