haur suzki

Posts : 222 Join date : 2008-07-26 Age : 32

haru looked around as she walked along the streets of the leaf village. "what to do...what to do?" she muddered to herself, as she wounder aimlessly around. " i know!" she said snapping her fingers together. haru tore off looking around as she dashed back into the house grabbed a small black bound book and ran out. "i'll capture the stances of ninja" she said as she took her palce in the trees and begun drawing ninja as they trained.

Subject: Re: haur suzki Sat Jul 26, 2008 9:10 pm

I say this deserves a D. It's to short with not much detail and you have some spelling and grammar mistakes. You can create Academy Students or Genin.

Subject: Re: haur suzki Sun Jul 27, 2008 5:19 pm

2nd spelling and grammer so D. I am MOD hereby give you a D and therefore you can create either a Academy student or genin character

Posts : 22 Join date : 2008-07-14

Ren you dumbass Mange already said that

Admin Posts : 181 Join date : 2008-07-11

Seriously

Subject: Re: haur suzki Wed Jul 30, 2008 3:55 pm

Renjiro Hyuuga wrote:: 2nd spelling and grammer so D. I am MOD hereby give you a D and therefore you can create either a Academy student or genin character

Yea and Im an ADMIN

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